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Write a letter to the landlord about the damage caused due to bad weather.

Write a letter to the landlord about the damage caused due to bad weather. 15R9X
Dear Mr. Brown, My name is Sarvajyoth. I am one of the new tenants residing in your basement. I am writing to complain you about the nuisance faced by me as a consequence of heavy rainfall and strong wind in the recent times. As a result of detrimental weather conditions, the window of my bedroom has broken. In addition, water was filled inside my room which ruined the paintings on the wall. Although, I was managing the situation my covering the window with a curtain, but it also got drenched with rain water the other day. Furthermore, my room gets cool by the wind which caused me fever. It will be great if you fix the new window with blinds in order to eliminate the menace tackled by me or, otherwise, i will be left with no choice of complaining the relevant authorities. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours truly, Sarvajyoth
Dear Mr. Brown,

My name is
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Sarvajyoth
. I am one of the new tenants residing in your basement. I am writing to complain you about the nuisance faced by me as a consequence of heavy rainfall and strong wind in the recent times.

As a result
of detrimental weather conditions, the window of my bedroom has broken.
In addition
, water
was filled
inside my room which ruined the paintings on the wall.

Although, I was managing the situation my covering the window with a curtain,
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but
it
also
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got
drenched with rain water the other day.
Furthermore
, my room
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gets
cool by the wind which caused me fever.

It will be great if you
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fix
the new window with blinds in order to eliminate the menace tackled by me or,
otherwise
,
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i
will be
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left
with no choice of complaining the relevant authorities. I hope to hear from you
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soon
.

Yours
truly
,

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Sarvajyoth

IELTS letter Write a letter to the landlord about the damage caused due to bad weather.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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