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You work for a children's home which needs volunteers to help at weekends. Write the local newspaper requesringthar they publicuse the vacancies.

You work for a children's home which needs volunteers to help at weekends. Write the local newspaper requesringthar they publicuse the vacancies. 85qMx

I am writing to enquire about to find any volunteer to support at weekends. I would appreciate it if you could publicise the vacancies in your local newspaper therefore, Our orphanage needs helper to give support at the weekends. All kind of professions may have been accepted for this job in order to atract children and make interest for life, to discover their talants. Volunteers should be polite, kind and energetic. Also the work time will be capable for the applicants. They may work at night or during dayaccording to their desire. I hope that you will forgive me for troubling you with this matter of finding any assisstance to help on Saturdays and Sundays. In our orphanage taking up your valuable time. If any volunteers have they could contact the email address below. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely Flora Watson.

I am writing to Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.inquire
enquire
 about to find any volunteer to support at weekends. I would appreciate it if you could Possible spelling mistake. 'publicise' is British English.publicize
publicise
 the vacancies in your local newspaper therefore
, Our orphanage needs helper to give support at the weekends. All kind of professions may have been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
 for this job in order to Possible spelling mistake found.attracttracta tract
atract
 children and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 interest for life, to discover their Possible spelling mistake found.talents
talants
. Volunteers should be polite, kind and energetic. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 the work time will be capable for the applicants. They may work at night or during Possible spelling mistake found.day according
dayaccording
 to their desire. I hope that you will forgive me for troubling you with this matter of finding any Possible spelling mistake found.assistance
assisstance
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 on Saturdays and Sundays. In our orphanage taking up your valuable time. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 any volunteers have they could contact the email address below. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely
 Flora Watson. 