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You are looking for a part-time job.

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TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN, I am an Uzbek national from Samarkand and at present I am a master student at the University of World Languages, here in Tashkent, where I am studying for more than two months now. I am looking for part-time job as an English teacher probably at your school, I would be pleased if you could help me. I would apprecite if you give me permission to teach 9-11 forms. Moreover, I have been working as an English teacher more than two years at school number 5, in Samarkand. I can only work during the afternoons and at the weekends, because I am busy with my study during day times. I have got certificate of achievement on IT technology. In addition, I am computer-litrate and can work with Microsoft Office and Power Point. Except, I speak fluently Tajik, Russian and French as well. I have been learning Arabic for last three years as the second language. In recent years, I had temporary summer job as a guide in Registan Palace Hotel. Furthermore, I have a plan to take a tour around my native land Samarkand with your pupils, where I can introduce magnificent monuments of Temurids dynasty, necropolis of Shohi-Zinda complex, burial place of outstanding hadithteller in the Muslim world Imam Al-Bukhariy to pupils, to bring up them in the spirit of patriotism. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Faithfully yours, Bret Pitt.
TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN,

I am an Uzbek national from Samarkand and at present I am a master student at the University of World Languages, here in Tashkent, where I am studying for more than two months
now
.

I am looking for part-time job as an English teacher
probably
at your school, I would be
pleased
if you could
help
me.
I
would
apprecite
if you give me permission to teach 9-11 forms.
Moreover
, I have been working as an English teacher more than two years at school number 5, in Samarkand. I can
only
work during the afternoons and at the weekends,
because
I am busy with my study during day times.

I have
got
certificate of achievement on IT technology.
In addition
, I am
computer-litrate
and can work with Microsoft Office and
Power Point
. Except, I speak
fluently
Tajik
, Russian and French
as well
. I have been learning Arabic for last three years as the second language. In recent years, I had temporary summer job as a guide in
Registan
Palace Hotel.

Furthermore
, I have a plan to take a tour around my native land Samarkand with your pupils, where I can introduce magnificent monuments of
Temurids
dynasty, necropolis of
Shohi-Zinda
complex, burial place of outstanding
hadithteller
in the Muslim world Imam
Al-Bukhariy
to pupils, to bring up them in the spirit of patriotism.

I am looking forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Faithfully
yours,

Bret Pitt.
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6.0
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