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For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinueyour membership.Write a letter to the club secretary.​​In your letter●state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this●give details of how you have benefited from the club●explain why you want to leave

For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinueyour membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. ​​In your letter●state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this●give details of how you have benefited from the club●explain why you want to leave oJ6D
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to let you know that I intend to terminate my membership next month. I am a platinum member which, as I am sure you know, entitles me to use your facilities in alllocations across the country. I availed myself of the offer on your website and paid online with my credit card at the start of the year. Since joining your club I have become fitter, happier and more well rounded as a person. The morning yoga sessions help me to meditate before a busy day at work and I am also able to let out my aggression on the punching bags in the evening. Unfortunately, I am unable to continue with my membership because I am going back to live inIreland. I looked at your international locations and it looks like Ireland is not one of the countries you are present in, but if you decide to launch a gym there, I would be more than happy to rejoin. Yours faithfully, Roy
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to
let
you know that I intend to terminate my membership
next
month.

I am a platinum member which, as I am sure you know, entitles me to
use
your facilities in
alllocations
across the country. I availed myself of the offer on your website and paid online with my credit card at the
start
of the year. Since joining your club I have become fitter, happier and more
well rounded
as a person. The morning yoga sessions
help
me to meditate
before
a busy day at
work and
I am
also
able to
let
out my aggression on the punching bags in the evening. Unfortunately, I am unable to continue with my membership
because
I am going back to
live
inIreland
. I looked at your international locations and it looks like Ireland is not one of the countries you are present in,
but
if you decide to launch a gym there, I would be more than happy to rejoin. Yours
faithfully
,
Roy
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IELTS letter For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinueyour membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. ​​In your letter●state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this●give details of how you have benefited from the club●explain why you want to leave

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