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You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course. yKN3
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to seek your approval for an artificial intelligence online course. Currently, Udemy, a leading learning portal, providing the best online course through online mode with a minimal tuition fee of $1000. This course design to complete within two months and 4 hours of daily commitment. The batch will begin at the first of the next month. This engagement will cover various recent topics, like deep learning, Vision learning, etc. , in the fields of Artificial Intelligence. Our Banking organization recently focusing on the new edge technology, and try to implement various sectors in banking. So if I learn this technology, I would capture this in valuable projects of our organization. For example, I can enhance the automatic fetching of credit score functionality using Artificial Intelligence. For these reasons, I would request you to grant me paid leave for two months. This course required lots of concentration and commitment, so I do not think can work parallelly to achieve this learning goal. I am looking forward to from you. Yours faithfully, Subhabrata
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to seek your approval for an artificial intelligence online course.

Currently
, Udemy, a leading
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portal, providing the best online course through online mode with a minimal tuition fee of $1000. This course design to complete within two months and 4 hours of daily commitment.

The batch will
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at the
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month. This engagement will cover various recent topics, like deep
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, Vision
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, etc.
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,
in the fields of Artificial Intelligence.

Our Banking organization recently focusing on the new edge technology, and try to implement various sectors in banking.
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So
if I learn this technology, I would capture this in valuable projects of our organization.
For example
, I can enhance the automatic fetching of credit score functionality using Artificial Intelligence.

For these reasons, I would request you to grant me paid
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leave
for two months. This course required lots of concentration and commitment,
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I am looking forward to from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Subhabrata

IELTS letter You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

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