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There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan KX8N
Dear sir, My name is Jigisha Patel and I live n Avenue Residency, Ontario. I am writing this letter to inform you that the local council has selling the park near my home. I am satisfide with your work for developing our society. However, I disappoint with the decision that local government has decide to sale the park. This park is very important for our day to day life as we do our morning exercise here and get socialized with each other. In addition, children are fond of this park, they regularly play in the park and get their martial art coaching too. Parents feel this park is safe place for their young ones as it is near to our home. If his park is sold people have to go to the other park which is very far from our residency. I would like to acknowladge you that if the decision of selling is not reversed, I have to highlight this case into the media or inform to higher authorities. I would be grateful if you consider my letter and do needful. Yours faithluly, Jigisha Patel
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n Avenue Residency, Ontario. I am writing this letter to inform you that the local council has selling the
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park
near my home. I am
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satisfide
with your work for developing our society.
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, I disappoint with the decision that local
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government
has
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decide
to sale the
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park
. This
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park
is
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important
for our
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day to day
life as we do our morning exercise here and
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get
socialized with each other.
In addition
, children are fond of this
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park
, they
regularly
play in the
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park
and
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get
their martial art coaching too. Parents feel this
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park
is safe place for their young ones as it is near to our home.
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his
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is sold
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people
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have to
go to the other
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park
which is
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very
far from our residency. I would like to
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acknowladge
you that if the decision of selling is not reversed, I
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have to
highlight this case into the media or inform to higher authorities. I would be grateful if you consider my letter and do needful. Yours
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faithluly
,
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Jigisha
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Patel
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IELTS letter There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

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185 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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