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YOu received a letter from your English speaking friend,John, who is planning to come to your country for one-week holiday

YOu received a letter from your English speaking friend, John, who is planning to come to your country for one-week holiday kxdrW
Dear John, How have ever been? I was very happy when receiving your letter and I hope you are doing well. Today, I am writing in response to the questions you raised in your letter. In your letter, you asked me that how you can come to my house after arriving at the airport. My answer is that you can get to my house by car, by bus or by taxi. But I think you should go by bus because it is cheap, safe and very convenient. Regarding your question about somewhere to stay that is not too expensive. I would say that you can stay at ABC homestay because it offers resonable price and very clean, especially, here are full utensils for you to cook and washing machine.
Dear John,

How have ever been?

I was
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very
happy when receiving your letter and I hope you are doing well.

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Today
, I am writing in response to the questions you raised in your letter.

In your letter, you asked me that how you can
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come
to my
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house
after arriving at the airport. My answer is that you can
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get
to my
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house
by car, by bus or by taxi.
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But
I
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think
you should go by bus
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because
it is
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cheap
, safe and
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very
convenient.

Regarding your question about somewhere to stay
that is
not too expensive. I would say that you can stay at ABC homestay
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because
it offers
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resonable
price and
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very
clean,
especially
, here are full utensils for you to cook and washing machine.

IELTS letter YOu received a letter from your English speaking friend, John, who is planning to come to your country for one-week holiday

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
129 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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