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You have won two tickets to go to a concert. However, the event is taking place far from home. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter:

You have won two tickets to go to a concert. However, the event is taking place far from home. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: 30lJY

Dear Soju, Hope you are doing great, I am very excited to tell you that I have won two tickets to the Tomorrowland concert which is going to take place next week. I know that it was your dream to attend this kind of concert since we were in college. Let me explain in detail, this ticket I won in lucky draw coupon which I had bought last month from the shopping mall. I would like to invite you to this concert and I'm sure we are going to have so much fun, however, this is happening in the countryside which would be far from our place but I have already made an arrangement for it and the DJ who will be coming for this concert is your favorite singer and rapper Jeff Benzos. Let me know how you feel about it and when you can come to my home. Your friend, Khushboo

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so
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come
 to my home.

Your friend,

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Khushboo