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You are studying in a different country. The College has invited you to volunteer to conduct an international day. Write a letter to college coordinator stating 1. Do you like the idea of conducting and international day 2. Do you know to prepare any special dish of your country 3. Any activity that you plan to do on the particular day?

You are studying in a different country. The College has invited you to volunteer to conduct an international day. Write a letter to college coordinator stating 1. Do you like the idea of conducting and international day 2. Do you know to prepare any special dish of your country 3. Any activity that you plan to do on the particular day? raWAk

Dear Mr. Carl Johns, I am writing this letter to express my joy and to appreciate your decision to conduct an International day event. Thank you for the opportunity you offered me as a volunteer for this special event. As a college with many students from across the world, I am sure this event will definitely help everyone to understand multiple ethnicities, cultural values and also give an idea about how the people live in each part of the globe. I would like to prepare some traditional South Indian dishes because I was born and grew up in the Southern part of India. I wish to conduct a Bollywood dance festival with other Indian students. Indian films, especially Bollywood, is known for dance and music. I believe this will be good fun for the students from other countries. I am thanking you again for inviting me as a volunteer. Please reply to me if you like my ideas. So I can coordinate with other students and make the arrangements. Yours sincerely, Peter Jan

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Yours sincerely
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Peter Jan