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You and classmated have been trying to find a book for a while and the book is out of stock

You and classmated have been trying to find a book for a while and the book is out of stock DY1Dk

Dear Mr. Nick, We are students in school. Because our teacher give a task which depends on literature, we have to look for a book. Therefore we are trying to find it now. If it would be possible for you to help me to find it. There are many necessary informations in this book and we must learn them until control works. If we cannot find it, our taecher punish us. That' s why, we need to book it to the publish ers. I hope that my request will not inconvenience you too much. I think that this book may be used by a lot of pupil in future. As a result, publishers should republish them. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Thank you for your attention. Your faithfully, All of class 11b.

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Because
 our teacher give a task which depends on literature, we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 look for a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
book
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
 we are trying to find it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. If it Consider removing 'would'. (Usually, 'would' does not occur in a conditional clause, unless to make a request or give a polite order.)waswere
would be
 possible for you to In informal texts, 'to' is not necessary. Do you mean "help me find"?help me find
help me to find
 it. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 necessary The word 'informations' is a legal term. In standard English, the word 'information' is a non-count noun. Did you mean "information"?information
informations
 in this Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).book, and
book and
 we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 learn them until control works. If we cannot find it, our Possible spelling mistake found.teacher
taecher
 punish us. That' s why, we need to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
book
 it to the Did you mean the noun "publishing"?publishing
publish
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ers
. I hope that my request will not inconvenience you too much. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
book
 may be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 by Possible agreement error. The noun pupil seems to be countable; consider using: "a lot of pupils".a lot of pupils
a lot of pupil
Did you mean: "in the future"?in the future
in future
. As a result
, publishers should republish them. I look forward to hearing from you as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. Thank you for your attention. Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
faithfully
, All of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 11b. 