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SOME PEOPLE THINK LIVING INBAD SITUATION IS

SOME PEOPLE THINK LIVING INBAD SITUATION IS JVag5
Some peoples believe that it is better to accept bad situation such as unsatisfied job, or shortage of money, other argue that it is better to try to improve such situation. Not all peoples are same like fingers. They have difference points of thinking in different ways. Some people believe that it is better to accept bad situation and some peoples believe on their mind power and fate. At the end of this written I will try to share my personal opinions. First, I will discuss those people who are accepting bad situation, for example one of my college, he is working in one manufacturing company, and that company is running for 24 hours. His duty is always going to change after week, his body is also not accepting change after short time, he always felt tide on every day, and on the other side he cannot discuss with his manager beside he is also not trying to search job in other company, he always afraid to change his job and he don’t want to come out from his comfort zone. Even he cannot take his own decisions. He is always accepting this type of awful situation. On the other side, some peoples decided to go against all odds and achieve according to their wish, and they do not care about to make or break life rules. They do not want to blame anybody for their conditions. For example my father want to make my brother as doctor, but my brother was interested in engineering field from his school life, he took admission in engineering against all odds, and on last he is able to convince my father. In fact, he is completely expert in his field, now my father is extremely satisfied with him. In conclusion, some peoples prefer to accept their rough situation as they are afraid to change their lives, and other prefer to big thing with such conditions as they want to put effort. In my opinion later, one have better because they rely on themselves rather than anyone else. 07/10/2021 Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to give feedback on my cookery class, which I have taken recently from your well know institute “Red ribbon international”. As I was not good on cutting and cooking skills, therefore I joint this short-term cookery course, which has proved very beneficial for me. I joint your cookery course on 20 august 2021 for one month and completed it on 20 Sep 2021. The course was very good and I able to learn many different techniques of cutting and cooking like fishes, vegetables, chicken and fruits as well. I also learn chicken biryani and chines noddle during this cuisine. Now I am using the cooking recipes, which I learn from cookery course during weekend. All of my family loves all foods, which I cook, and this all credit goes to your cookery course. Now on some occasions like birthday parties, family gathering festival, I prepare food for my relatives and for guests and received a lot of appreciation from them. I would like to recommend you to add one more baking course in you institute, because they are so many peoples do not know how to bake well, because they do not know how to use oven in proper way. On the other side-baking course will be worthwhile for him. I would like to joint more cookery course in future. I look forward to hear your positive response soon Yours sincerely, ABCD Dated: 09/10/2021 Time 14: 25 to 14: 35
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argue that it is
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to try to
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such situation.

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ways.
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believe on their mind power and fate. At the
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of this written I will try to share my personal opinions.

First
, I will discuss those
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people
who are accepting
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bad
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situation
,
for example
one of my college, he is working in one manufacturing
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company
, and that
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company
is running for 24 hours. His duty is always going to
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change
after week, his body is
also
not accepting
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change
after short time, he always felt tide on every day, and on the
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other
side he cannot discuss with his manager beside he is
also
not trying to search job in
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other
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company
,
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he
always afraid to
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change
his
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job and
he
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don’t
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want
to
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come
out from his comfort zone. Even he cannot take his
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own
decisions. He is always accepting this type of awful situation.

On the
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other
side,
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decided to go against all odds and achieve according to their wish, and they do not care about to
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make
or break life
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rules
. They do not
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want
to blame anybody for their conditions.
For example
my father
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want
to
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make
my brother as doctor,
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my brother
was interested
in engineering field from his school life, he took admission in engineering against all odds, and on last he is able to convince my father. In fact, he is completely expert in his field,
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now
my father is
extremely
satisfied with him.

In conclusion
,
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peoples
prefer to accept their rough
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situation
as they are afraid to
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their
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lives
, and
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other
prefer to
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big
thing with such conditions as they
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want
to put effort.
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In
my opinion later, one have
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better
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because
they rely on themselves
rather
than anyone else.

07/10/2021

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to give feedback on my
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cookery
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class
, which I have taken recently from your well know institute “Red ribbon international”. As I was not
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good
on cutting and cooking
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skills
,
therefore
I joint this short-term
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cookery
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course
, which has proved
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very
beneficial for me.

I joint your
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cookery
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course
on 20
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august
2021 for one month and completed it on 20 Sep 2021. The
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was
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and
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able to learn
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many
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techniques of cutting and cooking like fishes, vegetables, chicken and fruits
as well
. I
also
learn chicken biryani and chines noddle during this cuisine.

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Now
I am using the cooking recipes, which I learn from
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cookery
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course
during weekend. All of my family
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loves
all foods, which I cook, and this all credit goes to your
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cookery
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course
.
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Now
on
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occasions like birthday parties, family gathering festival, I prepare food for my relatives and for guests and received
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a lot of
appreciation from them.

I would like to recommend you to
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add
one more baking
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course
in you institute,
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they are
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do not know how to bake well,
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because
they do not know how to
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use
oven in proper way. On the
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other
side-baking
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course
will be worthwhile for him. I would like to joint more
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cookery
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course
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in future
.

I look forward
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to hear
your
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positive
response
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Yours
sincerely
,

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ABCD


Dated: 09/10/2021

Time 14: 25 to 14: 35
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