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Write a letter to a colleague who is hospitalized at the moment.

Write a letter to a colleague who is hospitalized at the moment. NwARm
Dear Saidova Go'zal, We are upset to hear that you have been taken ill. Everyone has been staying a prayer for you, and we all miss you here at work. During your time in the hospital do not worry about anything at home, everyone is pulling together to help out your sister with everything that needs doing and also, do not worry about your job. I will help you myself and I will work extra for you, so that, our boss does not fire you. Additionally, what I want to suggestion is you need to eat more wholesome foods. So, take care and only worry about getting better. We are all thinking of you and praying for a speedy recovery. Fee free to ask us for any help you need. We will definitely be happy to help you. I also, hope recover faster. Thank you for your attention. Yours faithfully, Ne'matova Sevinch
Dear
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Saidova
Go'
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zal
,

We
are upset
to hear that you have
been taken
ill. Everyone has been staying a prayer for you, and we all miss you here at work. During your time in the hospital do not worry about anything at home, everyone is pulling together to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
out your sister with everything that needs doing and
also
, do not worry about your job. I will
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
you myself and I will work extra for you,
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so
that, our boss does not fire you.

Additionally
, what I want to suggestion is you need to eat more wholesome foods.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, take care and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
worry about getting better. We are all thinking of you and praying for a speedy recovery. Fee free to ask us for any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
you need. We will definitely be happy to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
you. I
also
, hope recover faster.

Thank you for your attention.

Yours
faithfully
,

Ne'
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matova
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Sevinch
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a colleague who is hospitalized at the moment.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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