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Write an email to tell your pen pal friend some advice when he's coming to Vietnam one day

Write an email to tell your pen pal friend some advice when he's coming to Vietnam one day 2KQBb

Dear Jack, I'm so glad to know that you're coming to Viet Nam soon and let me introduce you what to do with one day in Binh Duong. Binh Duong is an interesting and famous tourist destination with many places for you. In one day you must definitely reach the following 3 places. The first one I want to suggest is the Phu Loi prison. This is a historic place where it was built by US army to confine Vietnamese soldiers and you can know how the crimes of the US army are. The second place is Dai Nam tourist area. Dai Nam is the place where attract many tourist with the combination of entertainment, hotels, rivers and lakes, etc. I'm sure you would be really enjoy it. And the last one is the night market and Bach Dang Walking Street. There are many regional specialities that would be very delicious. Of course you can enjoy food, walking around to exploring and looking beautiful scenery as well. These are all of interesting places, right? Tell me when you're coming. Look forward to seeing you soon! Best wishes, Nhat Anh

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