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You read in a newspaper that a company is going to renovate some school buildings in your local area that are in a poor condition. You would like to offer your help. Write a letter to the charity paying for the renovation. In your letter Explain why you want to help with the renovation Suggest what you can do to help Say when you are available to start work

You read in a newspaper that a company is going to renovate some school buildings in your local area that are in a poor condition. You would like to offer your help. Write a letter to the charity paying for the renovation. In your letter Explain why you want to help with the renovation Suggest what you can do to help Say when you are available to start work 7raWA
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my interest in the school buildings’ renovation in our district. I am Hamza, Founder of Smart Building Solutions, providing electrical and IT expertise in different scopes. To start with, I read the advertisement in a newspaper regarding this wonderful venture of refurbishing the schools that are in poor condition with charitable fund. I immediately wanted to join the cause as these schools are meant for unprivileged students. To add more, I believe that these pupils are the future of our nation. My company wants to take over the electrical scope of works, in full capacity. In addition to the lightning and power supply, we will introduce surveillance, provide IT infrastructure for learning and development of these children. Moreover, we have completed the case study and estimated the expenditure of the project. Finally, I would like to meet your team to discuss further details so we can start participating in this humanitarian cause as soon as possible. If approved, we could start work by the beginning of next month which is the required time to mobilize manpower and procure material. I urge you to consider our offer, looking forward to your positive response. Yours faithfully, Hamza Khan
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my interest in the school buildings’ renovation in our district. I am Hamza, Founder of Smart Building Solutions, providing electrical and IT expertise in
different
scopes.

To
start
with, I read the advertisement in a newspaper regarding this wonderful venture of refurbishing the schools that are in poor condition with charitable fund. I immediately wanted to
join
the cause as these schools
are meant
for unprivileged students. To
add
more, I believe that these pupils are the future of our nation.

My
company
wants to take over the electrical scope of works, in full capacity.
In addition
to the lightning and power supply, we will introduce surveillance, provide IT infrastructure for learning and development of these children.
Moreover
, we have completed the case study and estimated the expenditure of the project.

Finally
, I would like to
meet
your team to discuss
further
details
so
we can
start
participating in this humanitarian cause as
soon
as possible. If approved, we could
start
work by the beginning of
next
month which is the required time to mobilize manpower and procure material.

I urge you to consider our offer, looking forward to your
positive
response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Hamza Khan
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IELTS letter You read in a newspaper that a company is going to renovate some school buildings in your local area that are in a poor condition. You would like to offer your help. Write a letter to the charity paying for the renovation. In your letter Explain why you want to help with the renovation Suggest what you can do to help Say when you are available to start work

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
204 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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