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You read an article in a newspaper about a citUT or town.Some of the information in that article was not correct.Write a letter to the newspaper editions. Describe how you know the city Tell what the problems are Suggest what you want the editor to do

You read an article in a newspaper about a citUT or town. Some of the information in that article was not correct. Write a letter to the newspaper editions. Describe how you know the city Tell what the problems are Suggest what you want the editor to do QLRAw
Dear Sir, My name is Kiran, a resident of Prem Nagar, Ludhiana. I am a regular reader of your esteemed newspaper. However, today I am writing this letter to draw your kind attention towards the inaccurate information published in 'The Times of India' regarding my hometown dated 16/07/2020. Let me explain in detail the situation. Actually an article was published in the unknown facts column about the history of my hometown. Although the article provided extremely authentic information, it had not fully comprehend the knowledge of a well known Razia sultan's fort, and it was perhaps, mistakenly mentioned Rani Laxmibai instead of Razia in the column. Taking into consideration, the reputation of this newspaper, I would like to suggest that it must be republished with the correct name so that people might expect realistic news from such a reputed newspaper and it would further enhance the public faith towards the publishing authority. Hoping for a kind consideration in this regard. Yours faithfully, Kiran
Dear Sir,

My name is Kiran, a resident of
Prem
Nagar, Ludhiana. I am a regular reader of your esteemed newspaper.
However
,
today
I am writing this letter to draw your kind attention towards the inaccurate information published in 'The Times of India' regarding my hometown dated 16/07/2020.

Let
me
explain
in detail the situation. Actually an article
was published
in the unknown
facts
column about the history of my hometown. Although the article provided
extremely
authentic information, it had not
fully
comprehend
the knowledge of a well known
Razia
sultan's fort, and it was perhaps,
mistakenly
mentioned
Rani
Laxmibai
instead
of
Razia
in the column.

Taking into consideration, the reputation of this newspaper, I would like to suggest that it
must
be republished
with the correct name
so
that
people
might
expect
realistic news from such a reputed newspaper and it would
further
enhance the public faith towards the publishing authority.

Hoping for a kind consideration in this regard.

Yours
faithfully
,

Kiran
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IELTS letter You read an article in a newspaper about a citUT or town. Some of the information in that article was not correct. Write a letter to the newspaper editions. Describe how you know the city Tell what the problems are Suggest what you want the editor to do

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  American English
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162 words
6.0
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