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Complaint to store manager reagrdaing faulty TV purchase

Complaint to store manager reagrdaing faulty TV purchase 7a38y

Dear Store Manager, I purchased a TV from your store on May 30, 2020. It worked perfectly until I was watching football three days later. The screen went black and the TV stopped working. I returned to your store on June 4, 2020 and asked a salesman if a manager could help me exchange the TV. He asked me to wait while he went to fetch the manager. Thirty minutes passed by when I saw him closing a sale with a customer an aisle down. I went up to him and asked if he talked to the manager yet. He responded, “We’re not a repair shop. Take it somewhere else. ” The salesman was extremely rude and unprofessional throughout the whole encounter. He dismissed my claims of your store’s 30-day return policy, which was clearly printed on my receipt. I request that you look into the incident and assist me in exchanging my defective TV with a working one. I look forward to hearing back from you. Regards, Preeti

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Store
 Manager,

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purchased
 a TV from your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 on May 30, 2020. It worked perfectly
 until I was watching football three days later. The screen went black and the TV This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceaseddiscontinued
stopped
 working.

I returned to your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 on June 4, Some style guides suggest that commas should set off the year in a month-day-year date: "2020,".2020,
2020
 and asked a salesman if a manager could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me exchange the TV. He asked me to wait while he went to fetch the manager. Thirty minutes passed by when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 him closing a sale with a customer an aisle down. I went up to him and asked if he talked to the manager yet
. He responded, “We’re not a repair shop. Take it somewhere else. ”

The salesman was extremely
 rude and unprofessional throughout the whole encounter. He dismissed my claims of your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store’s
 30-day return policy, which was clearly
 printed on my receipt.

I request that you look into the incident and assist me in exchanging my defective TV with a working one. I look forward to hearing back from you.

Regards,

Preeti