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Write a letter to landlord about the problem you have in house of renting.

Write a letter to landlord about the problem you have in house of renting. kYWdK

Dear Bill I am writing to you to inform you about an electrical problem in my apartment that really requires your attention in this matter. My parents have concerns about their safety measures and they are worried because we just shifted here before 2 weeks. Let me please allow to elaborate the problem what is going on. Actually, the one of the yellow lights in the washroom does not work correctly. It makes noise when we on and off the switch. It is really hard to be in a restroom without good light, and my parents are old so they need it to be fixed immediately. On top of that, the tap of washroom over the sink is leaking from last 2 days; consequently, the walls of bathroom get more humidity than usual. I have asthma, so it is hard for me to remain in a humid environment for longer time. I really want to ask you to visit my home to check out what are the real problems and solve it out as soon as possible. I would appreciate your attention and solution. Yours sincerely, Sarah

Dear Bill

I am writing to you to inform you about an electrical problem in my apartment that really
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measures and
 they are worried
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because
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 shifted here This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 2 weeks. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
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allow
 to elaborate the problem what is going on.

Actually, the one of the yellow lights in the washroom does not work correctly
. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 noise when we on and off the switch. It is really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to be in a restroom without This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 light, and my parents are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
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so
 they need it to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 immediately. On top of that
, the tap of washroom over the sink is leaking from last 2 days; consequently
, the walls of bathroom This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 more humidity than usual. I have asthma, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 for me to remain in a humid environment for longer time.

I really
 want to ask you to visit my home to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 out what are the real problems and solve it out as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would appreciate your attention and solution.

Yours sincerely
,

Sarah