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You recently returned from oversea by air and left a valuable item on the plane. Write a letter to the airline manager. In your letter .Describe the item you left behind .Say why it is important to you .Explain what you would like the airline manager to do Write at least 150 words.

You recently returned from oversea by air and left a valuable item on the plane. Write a letter to the airline manager. In your letter. Describe the item you left behind. Say why it is important to you. Explain what you would like the airline manager to do VBwgJ
Dear sir/madam, I am writing to ask if am item of hand luggage I left on one of your flights has been found. I flew to Sydney last night on flight SOOI from Singapore landing at 9: 45am. When I arrived home, I realized I had not taken my small travel bag from the overhead locker. It is made of black leather, has one external compartment and there was a luggage tag attached to the handle with my name and address on it. While the bag itself is not valuable, there are other items I cannot afford to lose. Besides the electronics, including a mini iPad and hard drive, there is also a work diary in it which contains a great deal of crucial work-related information. There were also other personal effects which have great sentimental value. I would be grateful if you would do two things. Firstly, please acknowledge receipt of this letter and secondly, could you find out whether my bag has been handed over in by your cabin staff to your loose and found department? Please contact me as soon as possible to let me know whether it has or not. Yours sincerely, Lyn Akinyemi
Dear sir/madam,

I am writing to ask if am item of hand luggage I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
on one of your flights has
been found
.

I flew to Sydney last night on flight
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SOOI
from Singapore landing at 9: 45am. When I arrived home, I realized I had not taken my
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
travel bag from the overhead locker. It
is made
of black leather, has one external compartment and there was a luggage tag attached to the handle with my name and address on it.

While the bag itself is not valuable, there are other items I cannot afford to lose.
Besides
the electronics, including a mini iPad and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
drive, there is
also
a work diary in it which contains a great deal of crucial work-related information. There were
also
other personal effects which have great sentimental value.

I would be grateful if you would do two things.
Firstly
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
acknowledge receipt of this letter and
secondly
, could you find out whether my bag has
been handed
over in by your cabin staff to your loose and found department?
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Please
contact me as
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soon
as possible to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know whether it has or not.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Lyn
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Akinyemi
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IELTS letter You recently returned from oversea by air and left a valuable item on the plane. Write a letter to the airline manager. In your letter. Describe the item you left behind. Say why it is important to you. Explain what you would like the airline manager to do

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  American English
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6.0
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