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Write a letter to friend who organize a part last week and you forgot the wallet at their house.

Write a letter to friend who organize a part last week and you forgot the wallet at their house. yXxKr
Dear Smith, John, I would like to thank you for a nice party last week; it was a pleasure to be part of it. I really enjoyed a lot, although we should arrange similar once a month to get together. It will be one of my great holiday week spend in life, Thanks a ton for organizing such party. Smith, I have forgotten my wallet at your house that must be in the drawer next to the bed in second room. Could you please check if it's still there. I am really sorry I don’t know how it left over there, usually I don’t forget the wallet like that, It must be party effect. Kindly send my wallet back as I have my money and all bank cards are in that, I would definitely need them. You can send through FedEx on my address, House no: X38, street X 3883 C, Highland Toronto, Canada. Regards: Vishal Gurmukh Das
Dear Smith, John,

I would like to thank you for a nice party last week; it was a pleasure to be part of it. I
really
enjoyed a lot, although we should arrange similar once a month to
get
together. It will be one of my great holiday week spend in life, Thanks a ton for organizing such party.

Smith, I have forgotten my wallet at your
house
that
must
be in the drawer
next
to the bed in second room. Could you
please
check
if it's
still
there. I am
really
sorry I don’t know how it
left
over there,
usually
I don’t forget the wallet like that, It
must
be party effect.

Kindly
send
my wallet back as I have my money and all bank cards are in that, I would definitely need them. You can
send
through FedEx on my address,
House
no: X38, street X 3883 C, Highland Toronto, Canada.

Regards:

Vishal
Gurmukh
Das
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IELTS letter Write a letter to friend who organize a part last week and you forgot the wallet at their house.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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