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Write a Letter to warden for problem With accommodation

Write a Letter to warden for problem With accommodation VBwA6
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the accommodation which is being provided to me by your Institute at Skylok Residency, Kolkata. What I have been given / allocated is a one-bed room apartment with no kitchen in it. Though it has an attached bathroom, there is no water during most of the day. Moreover, the sink has developed a crack resulting in the leakage of water. Consequently, the floor beneath it is always wet increasing the risk of slipping and falling. I was hoping to get a one bedroom apartment with a kitchen and a bathroom as I prefer to cook my food rather than eat / ate out due to health issues. My request had also been approved by the accommodation officer. However, the room I received is nowhere close to what I wanted. So I request you to make appropriate arrangements for my housing as per the guidelines of the institute at the earliest. Thank you for your time. I will very much appreciate prompt action in this regard. Yours sincerely
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the accommodation which is
being provided
to me by your Institute at
Skylok
Residency, Kolkata. What I have been
given
/ allocated is a one-bed room apartment with no kitchen in it. Though it has an attached bathroom, there is no water during most of the day.
Moreover
, the sink has developed a crack resulting in the leakage of water.
Consequently
, the floor beneath it is always wet increasing the
risk
of slipping and falling.

I was hoping to
get
a
one bedroom
apartment with a kitchen and a bathroom as I prefer to cook my food
rather
than eat / ate out due to health issues. My request had
also
been approved
by the accommodation officer.
However
, the room I received is nowhere close to what I wanted.
So
I request you to
make
appropriate arrangements for my housing as per the guidelines of the institute at the earliest.

Thank you for your time.

I will
very
much appreciate prompt action in this regard.

Yours
sincerely
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IELTS letter Write a Letter to warden for problem With accommodation

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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