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you r attending a part time course in college. Due to some problem, you can't continue your course.

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I study electrical automation course in second semister at loyalist college. I am writing this letter to inform you that due to family emergency I can not pursue my remaining course. Yesterday, I heard from my parents that my grandmother had heart attack and she want to see me. Unfortunately, I have to go back my country and I am not sure when I come back. Additionally, my final exame will be on next week so I will able to attend that. I would be appreciate if I get break from this semester and I will be re-join next summer intake. I also require to same help in order to do with my college accommodation. I look forward to hearing from you. Your Sincerely, Mayur Patel

I study electrical automation course in second Possible spelling mistake found.semesterdemister
semister
 at loyalist college. I am writing this letter to inform you that due to family emergency I can not pursue my remaining course.

Yesterday, I heard from my parents that my grandmother had heart Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).attack, and
attack and
 she The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "wants", "wanted".wantswanted
want
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 me. Unfortunately, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 go back my Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).country, and
country and
 I am not sure when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 back. Additionally
, my final Possible spelling mistake found.examexamsexam e
exame
 will be on next
 week This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I Did you mean "will be able"?will be able
will able
 to attend that.

I would be Consider using the past participle "appreciated"?appreciated
appreciate
 if I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 break from this semester and I will be re-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
next
 summer intake. I also
 require to same This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 in order to do with my college accommodation.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to hearing from you.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
Sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.MayorMayer
Mayur
 Patel

IELTS letter you r attending a part time course in college. Due to some problem, you can't continue your course.

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

125 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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