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Write a letter of application to mrs hopkins the oganizer of the trip,telling her: -why would you like to go on the trip -what skills do you have -what previous experience

Write a letter of application to mrs hopkins the oganizer of the trip, telling her: -why would you like to go on the trip -what skills do you have -what previous experience pReAL

Dear mrs hopkins, I am writing this letter to apply for the being a player in your travel competition which i saw advertised on the newspaper. I want to go on the trip because i can explore to another country and meet new friends. I have been play a lot of exploring game before so that i am confident of my skills such as: go for a hunt or climbing the moutine. Last yeari joined a competition of hunting animal anh i am the winner. Therfore, i am patient and skillful enough to be a brilliant player. I would highly appreciate if you accept my letter. I am looking foward to hearing you in the near future. Yours faithfully, Linda

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.MrsMRSMrMarsFRSIRS
mrs
Possible spelling mistake found.Hopkins
hopkins
,

I am writing this letter to apply for Please check whether a word is missing between 'the' and 'being' or whether 'the' is the correct determiner.
the
 being a player in your travel competition which Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 advertised on the newspaper.

I want to go on the trip This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
Did you mean "I"?I
i
 can explore to another country and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 new friends. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have been play This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 exploring game This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am confident of my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 such as: go for a hunt or climbing the Possible spelling mistake found.routine
moutine
.

Last Possible spelling mistake found.yearyearsSaraKaraLaraMara
yeari
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatedfused
joined
 a competition of hunting animal Possible spelling mistake found.ANHandananyashAna
anh
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am the winner. Possible spelling mistake found.Therefore
Therfore
, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am patient and skillful This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 to be a brilliant player.

I would highly
 appreciate if you accept my letter. I am looking Possible spelling mistake found.forwardtowardHowardcowardCoward
foward
 to hearing you in the near future.

Yours faithfully
,

Linda