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Introduce yourself and what you want to accomplish in your life?

Introduce yourself and what you want to accomplish in your life? qV1oa

Hello, how are you all I'm fine hope so your are too let me introduce myself my name is sheeraz ahmed I'm from Pakistan I've done my graduation from international university Islamabad in BBA hons and my specialization in Marketing after my graduation recently i joined banking sector which is also my dream to join. Furthermore i started my career since 2018 to till as a customer service officer i got learned alot from my job area. . . Right now I'm going to change myself towards more like getting highest band in ielts test so i can get opportunity to visit different countries for highr study. In conclusion i just want to share my idea here so everyone know what exactly i want to accomplish in my life.

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so
 your are too This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me introduce myself my name is Possible spelling mistake found.sheerShirazSheenasheeredsheerssheerer
sheeraz
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ahmed
 I'm from Pakistan I've done my graduation from international university Islamabad in BBA hons and my specialization in Marketing after my graduation recently Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatedfused
joined
 banking sector which is also
 my dream to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Furthermore,
Furthermore
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 my career since 2018 to till as a customer service officer Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
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alot
 from my job area. Don't put a space before the full stop.
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Don't put a space before the full stop.
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Right This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I'm going to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 myself towards more like getting A determiner is probably missing here: "the highest".the highest
highest
 band in Possible spelling mistake found.IELTSbeltsmeltspeltsCeltswelts
ielts
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
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so
Did you mean "I"?I
i
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 opportunity to visit This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 countries for Possible spelling mistake found.highhigherhighshigh r
highr
 study.

In conclusion
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 want to share my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 here This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 everyone The pronoun 'everyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "knows", "knew".knowsknew
know
 what exactly Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 want to accomplish in my life. 