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write a letter to a friend who is currently moving to a new home. ask about new home say you can help and describe how you will help

write a letter to a friend who is currently moving to a new home. ask about new home say you can help and describe how you will help 9LBKn

Dear Pamelia, Hope you are doing great. I heard you will be moving to a new home soon. I guess it is much closer to your current working place. I wish i could accompany you as well. Is it located in the high way or near to the Park Avenue hotel. I am writing to inform you that i have a week holiday ahead as i completed my present project. So I will be happy to help you in shifting and also for any shopping, if needed. I also have few piece of new furnitures like bedset and cupboard at my place. If you wish you can shift it to your new place as I know its hard for you to bear all the expenses at once. Hoping to hear from you soon. Amelia.

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.PamelaAmelia
Pamelia
,

Hope you are doing great. I heard you will be moving to a new home This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. I guess it is much closer to your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 working place. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 wish Did you mean "I"?I
i
 could accompany you as well
. Is it located in the high way or near to the Park Avenue hotel.

I am writing to inform you that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have a week holiday ahead as Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 completed my present project. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I will be happy to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you in shifting and also
 for any shopping, if needed.

I also
 have Possible agreement error. The noun piece seems to be countable; consider using: "few pieces".few pieces
few piece
 of new Possible spelling mistake found.furniture
furnitures
 like Possible spelling mistake found.besetbedsitbed set
bedset
 and cupboard at my place. If you wish you can shift it to your new place as I know its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 for you to bear all the expenses at once.

Hoping to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Amelia. 

IELTS letter write a letter to a friend who is currently moving to a new home. ask about new home say you can help and describe how you will help

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

134 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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