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I am on holidays visiting Pakistan from Saudia Arabia and now wishes to visit Turkey.

I am on holidays visiting Pakistan from Saudia Arabia and now wishes to visit Turkey. bY3R6
Dear Sir / Madam, I, SYED HADI ALI holding passport number KX1801313 would like to travel to Turkey for tourism purpose for 9 days, as I am on holidays visiting Pakistan from Saudia Arabia and now wishes to visit Turkey. Please find the visa application form properly filled and signed along with the valid passport, Photographs and the relevant documents for your review. All the expenses will be borne by me on this trip. Kindly consider my application and grant necessary visa.
Dear Sir / Madam, I,
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SYED
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HADI
ALI holding passport number KX1801313 would like to travel to Turkey for tourism purpose for 9 days, as I am on holidays visiting Pakistan from
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Saudia
Arabia and
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now
wishes to visit Turkey.

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Please
find the visa application form
properly
filled and signed along with the valid passport, Photographs and the relevant documents for your review.

All the expenses will
be borne
by me on this trip.

Kindly consider my application and grant necessary visa.
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IELTS letter I am on holidays visiting Pakistan from Saudia Arabia and now wishes to visit Turkey.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
82 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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