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You receive this email from your English pen friend, Matt. Write to Matt and tell him what you will do to improve your English in this new school year. GM3qm
Hi Matt, Good to see your email. As per plan, I will start look at improving my English by practicing writing small sentances and framing words with right content. I have to speak with people around me in english language even if they are from india and they can understand local language. I am planning to buy some books related to British and American English literature to look at difficult words and its meaning in local language. So, I need to go for tutan if even after I will give a try with all the other options we have. Finally, I will check onlne vidoes in social media and also in youtube to get to knowledge about speaking flow. Thanks, Siva K.
Hi Matt,

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your email. As per plan, I will
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look at improving my English by practicing writing
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small
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sentances
and framing words with right content. I
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people
around me in
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english
language even if they are from
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india and
they can understand local language.

I am planning to
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buy
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some
books related to British and American English literature to look at difficult words and its meaning in local language.
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So
, I need to go for
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tutan
if even after I will give a try with all the other options we have.

Finally
, I will
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check
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onlne
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vidoes
in social media and
also
in
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youtube
to
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get
to knowledge about speaking flow.

Thanks,

Siva K.
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6 paragraphs
122 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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