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You placed an online order for a flower vase. However, when you received it, it was damaged. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, you should: Give the details about the equipment. Explain the damage. Suggest what you want the manager to do.

You placed an online order for a flower vase. However, when you received it, it was damaged. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, you should: Give the details about the equipment. Explain the damage. Suggest what you want the manager to do. 3EEd
Dear Sabri, I am writing this letter to inform you that I ordered a beautiful flower vase online from your company named Amazon. Unfortunately, when I got it, it was broken. I ordered a golden-coloured flower vase which was made of plastic. It was decorated with astonishing colours and glitters. The bottom part of that vase was wide and the top was shrunk. The most amazing thing that I loved about it was its size. It was two feet flower vase with heart-shaped corners. Now I feel so depressed because it is impossible to utilize it. I cannot even fix it due to its damage. The middle part is broken and it is useless currently. I tried to repair it with Feviquik but it does not work. Therefore, I am expecting a refund from you or I will be happy if you send me the new one. I really appreciate you. Best wishes.
Dear
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Sabri
, I am writing this letter to inform you that I ordered a
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beautiful
flower
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vase
online from your
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company
named Amazon. Unfortunately, when I
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got
it, it
was broken
.

I ordered a
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golden-coloured
flower
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vase
which
was made
of plastic. It
was decorated
with astonishing
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colours
and glitters. The bottom part of that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vase
was wide and the top
was shrunk
. The most amazing thing that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
loved
about it was its size. It was two feet flower
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vase
with heart-shaped corners.

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Now
I feel
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so
depressed
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because
it is impossible to utilize it. I cannot even
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fix
it due to its damage. The middle part
is broken
and it is useless
currently
. I tried to repair it with
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Feviquik
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but
it does not work.

Therefore
, I am expecting a refund from you or I will be happy if you
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send
me the new one. I
really
appreciate you.

Best wishes.

IELTS letter You placed an online order for a flower vase. However, when you received it, it was damaged. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, you should: Give the details about the equipment. Explain the damage. Suggest what you want the manager to do.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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