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You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match

Dear Kaleem, Hello, I hope you are feeling better than before and recovering well. I missed playing with you at the cricket match this weekend so thought of penning down the details about what happened at the match and who won the game. Our team has always been the competitive one against the Lakers. Although this match was not going in our favor initially due to bad weather conditions and of course due to the absence of a great player like you, we still managed to win at the end. Lebron was a tough player to beat as he is very efficient in his game. However, a small catch miss from his side ended up being in our favor. On the day of match, the weather was pleasant in morning but got a big foggy which made the ground little bit slippery. Anyhow, the weather didn't bother me until I was about to slip, but thank god, balanced myself at the right time. Throughout the match, I had a sense of something being missing and that was definitely my partnership with you in the game. I felt that my partner who was in your replacement wasn't competitive enough. Anyway, after achieving victory, I felt happy and wished you were here too. I hope you recover soon and get fit enough so we can play the next match together soon. Wishing you a speedy recovery! Best wishes, Abeera
Dear
Kaleem
,

Hello, I hope you are feeling better than
before
and recovering well. I missed playing with you at the cricket
match
this weekend
so
thought
of penning down the
details
about what happened at the
match
and who won the game.

Our team has always been the competitive one against the Lakers. Although this
match
was not going in our favor
initially
due to
bad
weather conditions and
of course
due to the absence of a great player like you, we
still
managed to win at the
end
.
Lebron
was a tough player to beat as he is
very
efficient in his game.
However
, a
small
catch miss from his side ended up being in our favor.

On the day of
match
, the weather was pleasant in morning
but
got
a
big
foggy which made the ground
little bit
slippery. Anyhow, the weather didn't bother me until I was about to slip,
but
thank god, balanced myself at the right time.

Throughout the
match
, I had a sense of something being missing and that was definitely my partnership with you in the game. I felt that my partner who was in your replacement wasn't competitive
enough
. Anyway, after achieving victory, I felt happy and wished you were here too.

I hope you recover
soon
and
get
fit
enough
so
we can play the
next
match
together
soon
. Wishing you a speedy recovery!

Best wishes,

Abeera
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IELTS letter You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match

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  American English
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