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You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did mot work. You phoned the shop but no was taken.

Dear Sir I am writing to let you know (m) I bought a Refrigerator from your shop last few days ago, but suddenly nowadays it did not work properly. Let me explain situation of this refrigerator (m) the trouble started about few days ago, when I switch on my refrigerator it rapidly gets hot on backside, it felt will be fire anytime, furthermore, after few minute i might something smash inside the refrigerator. However, last yesterday i had phoned your shop and complained about trouble, the staff said they will taken within 6 hours, but as you know still they did not solve it. would you kindly consider it, because this refrigerator is essential for my family. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully Taj

Dear Sir

I am writing to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know (m) I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcooler
Refrigerator
 from your shop last few days ago, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
suddenly
 nowadays it did not work properly
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 situation of this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcooler
refrigerator
 (m) the trouble This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 about few days ago, when I switch on my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcooler
refrigerator
 it rapidly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 hot on backside, it felt will be fire anytime, furthermore
, after few minute Did you mean "I"?I
i
The word 'something' is a noun or an adjective. A verb or adverb is missing or misspelled here, or maybe a comma is missing.
might something
 smash inside the refrigerator.

However
, last yesterday Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 had phoned your shop and complained about trouble, the staff said they will Did you mean "take" or "be taken"?takebe taken
taken
 within 6 hours, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 as you know still
 they did not solve it.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWould
would
 you kindly consider it, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcooler
refrigerator
 is essential for my family.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully


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IELTS letter You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did mot work. You phoned the shop but no was taken.

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

124 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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