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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear Mr. Smith, I'm Namitha, your new neighbour. I recently received your letter about the noise coming out of my flat. First of all, I really appologize for the inconvenience. Me and my family moved a week ago and we are doing some renovations in my appartment. Some of the floors as well as the washrooms are really messed up here. That's the main cause of sound. As you know it's very difficult to get workers for doing all these, so for the last couple of days there was three workers who stayed in my appartment to finish the work as soon as possible. So we were working hard to complete the renovation and that was the main couse of the whole day sound. I sincerely appologies you again and I promise to finish this in the next two days and will also shorten the working hours from 10 am to noon. I hope you will understand my situation. Your's faithfully Namitha Johnson
Dear Mr. Smith,

I'm
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Namitha
, your new
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neighbour
.

I recently received your letter about the noise coming out of my flat.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, I
really
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appologize
for the inconvenience.
When referring to yourself and somebody else, put their name first. Also check whether the nominative form "I" is required here.
Me
and my family
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
a week
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
ago and
we are doing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
renovations in my
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appartment
.
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?
Some of the
floors
as well
as the washrooms are
really
messed up here. That's the main cause of sound.

As you know it's
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
difficult to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
workers for doing all these,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
for the last couple of days
Did you mean "there were three workers"?
there was three workers
who stayed in my
Possible spelling mistake found.
appartment
to finish the work as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
we were working
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to complete the renovation and that was the main
Possible spelling mistake found.
couse
of the whole day sound. I
sincerely
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appologies
you again and I promise to finish this in the
next
two days and will
also
shorten the working hours from 10 am to noon.

I hope you will understand my situation.

Did you mean "Your" or "Yours"?
Your's
faithfully


Possible spelling mistake found.
Namitha
Johnson

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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