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ou are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Sir, I am Shubham Sharma, working as a graphic designer in your team and I am writing this letter to request you for leaves for some time. As a graphic designer, I joined to course for learning a new software Adobe After Effects. This software is generally used for editing videos, adding effects and animations to the recorded videos. I have started this course 3 months past and now it has come to the end. I have 3 exams upcoming month So, I would require 15 days off from the work. I know that our department's main event EQUINOX is arriving next to next month I really can understand that we have a lot many things to do and asking for leaves at this moment is quite risky but I assure you that I will be working late shifts after I join back to the office and will make this EQUINOX the best of all time as this software will help a lot to market it to alumni on social platforms as we can record the videos and then I will be animating it to add some glare on it that will make hype on social media platforms and that can increase the number of alumni registering to the event. I would really appreciate it if you provide me 15 days off it will be a good gesture to showcase your support towards me. Thank You, Shubham Sharma Graphic Designer
Dear Sir,

I am Shubham Sharma, working as a graphic designer in your
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team and
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leaves
for
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time.

As a graphic designer, I
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joined
to course for learning a new software Adobe After Effects. This software is
generally
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used
for editing videos, adding effects and animations to the recorded videos. I have
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started
this course 3 months past and
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now
it has
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come
to the
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end
. I have 3 exams upcoming month
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So
, I would require 15 days off from the work.
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I
know that our department's main
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event
EQUINOX is arriving
next
to
next
month I
really
can understand that we have a lot
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many
things to do and asking for
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leaves
at this moment is quite risky
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but
I assure you that I will be working late shifts after I
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join
back to the office and will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
this EQUINOX the best of all time as this software will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
a lot to market it to alumni on social platforms as we can record the videos and then I will be animating it to
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add
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some
glare on it that will
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make
hype on social media platforms and that can increase the number of alumni registering to the
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event
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would
really
appreciate it if you provide me 15 days off it will be a
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good
gesture to showcase your support towards me.

Thank You,

Shubham Sharma

Graphic Designer
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IELTS letter ou are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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240 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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