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A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before. Say where you went, Where you stayed, What you can do there and what the food was like.

Dear Sarah, I hope you and your family are doing well. I'm glad that you finally decided to go on a vacation and I would recommend you to visit a beautiful place where I went recently. I visited Hyderabad last month which is located in the southern part of India. The city is famous for its multi-cultural diversity and there are tourist attractions like Charminar, Salarjung museum, and the famous falaknauma palace which are worth seeing. Unfortunately, I missed an opportunity to visit the ancient chilkur temple because of my tight schedule. I booked a 3-star hotel near the airport and hailed a taxi for 4 nights for sight-seeing. The hotel has ensuite facilities with an exceptional service and mainly, the price range is within my budget limit. There are also many amusement parks in the city where my family enjoyed being there. As the city is well-known for shopping, I purchased a traditional dress which I can wear for special occasions. You may know that I'm a food lover, I tried hyderabadi biryani for the first time which is delicious food made up of mixing all the spices. I would definitely recommend you to try this meal. I hope you travel safely and I can't wait to see you the next summer. Lots of love, Sandeep.
Dear Sarah,

I hope you and your family are doing well. I'm glad that you
finally
decided to go on a vacation and I would recommend you to visit a
beautiful
place where I went recently.

I
visited Hyderabad last month which
is located
in the southern part of India. The city is
famous
for its multi-cultural diversity and there are tourist attractions like
Charminar
,
Salarjung
museum, and the
famous
falaknauma
palace which are worth seeing. Unfortunately, I missed an opportunity to visit the ancient
chilkur
temple
because
of my tight schedule.

I booked a 3-star hotel near the airport and hailed a taxi for 4 nights for sight-seeing. The hotel has
ensuite
facilities with an exceptional service and
mainly
, the price range is within my budget limit.

There are
also
many
amusement parks in the city where my family enjoyed being there. As the city is well-known for shopping, I
purchased
a traditional dress which I can wear for special occasions. You may know that I'm a food lover, I tried
hyderabadi
biryani for the
first
time which is delicious food made up of mixing all the spices. I would definitely recommend you to try this meal.

I hope you travel
safely
and I can't wait to
see
you the
next
summer.

Lots of
love
,

Sandeep.
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before. Say where you went, Where you stayed, What you can do there and what the food was like.

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  American English
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217 words
6.0
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