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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter, explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Mrs. Janes, I am writing in response to your complaint letter concerning my house's noise recently. I sincerely apologise for this inconvenience and humbly request for your forgiveness. Honestly, I have recently studied a piano course under the institution of a tutor. As you know, my full-time job makes me quite busy in the office hours, consequently the only free time when I am able to dedicate to my class is evenings. This made you annoyed, and I am really sorry about my regular noise. As a solution, I have decided that I will continue my course at the center instead of my house as before. This way could help me to be able to continue the practice and especially not disrupt you. I totally understand your position and hope you could kindly accept my honest apology. I hope this unpleasant situation hasn't hurt our relationship. Yours sincerely, Hien
Dear Mrs.
Janes
,

I am writing in response to your complaint letter concerning my
house
's noise recently. I
sincerely
apologise
for this inconvenience and
humbly
request for your forgiveness.

Honestly
, I have recently studied a piano course under the institution of a tutor. As you know, my full-time job
makes
me quite busy in the office hours,
consequently
the
only
free time when I am able to dedicate to my
class
is evenings. This made you annoyed, and I am
really
sorry about my regular noise.

As a solution, I have decided that I will continue my course at the center
instead
of my
house
as
before
. This way could
help
me to be able to continue the practice and
especially
not disrupt you.

I
totally
understand your position and hope you could kindly accept my honest apology. I hope this unpleasant situation hasn't hurt our relationship.

Yours
sincerely
,

Hien
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter, explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
149 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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