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You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Tell him which team won Describe the weather conditions that day Say how you felt about the match.

You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Tell him which team won Describe the weather conditions that day Say how you felt about the match. DA0W
Dear Mat, Wishing you speedy recovery from your injury while practicing for the upcoming game. It was a very unfortunate that you were unavailable for the game day because since the beginning of the season your guarding skills were stand out point for high success rate. I hope you are ready for action on the court in upcoming weeks. Good news is that we won our basket ball match against Bronx warriors by six points. End score was 76-70 although an immensely nail biting game but in the end our 3 point shooting was spot on, Hence paved way for favorable result. On that day weather was very hot, Sweating and direct sun rays made it very challenging and immensely exhausting to play with intensity for all the 4 rounds, Moreover drinks breaks were not very helpful. I am glad game ended well for us. In the end think your presence could have made this win a lil easy, On the other hand excellent bench strength gives me high hopes of winning the finals. All the team members are eagerly waiting for you and hope you get well soon. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Lovingly
Dear Mat, Wishing you speedy recovery from your injury while practicing for the upcoming game. It was a
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unfortunate that you were unavailable for the game day
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since the beginning of the season your guarding
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skills
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out point for high success rate. I hope you are ready for action on the court in upcoming weeks.

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news is that we won our basket ball match against Bronx warriors by six points.
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score was 76-70 although an
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biting game
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in the
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our 3 point shooting was spot on,
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paved way for favorable result.

On that day weather was
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hot, Sweating and direct sun rays made it
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challenging and
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exhausting to play with intensity for all the 4 rounds,
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drinks breaks were not
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helpful. I am glad game ended well for us.

In the
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your presence could have made this win a
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easy,
On the other hand
excellent bench strength gives me high hopes of winning the finals. All the team members are
eagerly
waiting for you and hope you
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well
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. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
Lovingly
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IELTS letter You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Tell him which team won Describe the weather conditions that day Say how you felt about the match.

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6.0
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