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You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • tell him which team won • describe the conditions on the day • say how you felt about the match

You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • tell him which team won • describe the conditions on the day • say how you felt about the match 9nM3
Dear Hemil, I heard about an accident you met and it was very immoral feeling for me that you were not able to join the team, so I decided to express heart thrilling match appearance with you in this letter. The cricket match was played in the ground of sardar patel club last Sunday against national bank team as you know that it was a final match of corporate tournament. The match was very exciting and as a strike bowler team, we really miss your bowling attack which help us to sheltered our place in final match. However, after an enormous effort and all players tackle all event very calmly helps us to lift the trophy. On the match day weather was overcast and it was difficult for players to handle the situation. We had batted first and put the score of 180 but it was not a good total to handle the opposition because we are supposed to miss the tight bowling spell of you. Lastly our team had managed to win on last ball victory as they need a two run in one ball and I took the wicket. As a captain, it was very astonishing movement to took a wicket in last ball and really feel very good as we were looking to win this tournament in the past two years. I was missing you a lot in the match because to win this tournament was our united dream. Hope to see you on ground soon and take care Warm wishes, Jaiwick Soni
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Hemil
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very
immoral feeling for me that you were not able to
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join
the
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team
,
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so
I decided to express heart thrilling
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match
appearance with you in this letter.

The cricket
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match
was played
in the ground of
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sardar
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patel
club last Sunday against national bank
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team
as you know that it was a final
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match
of corporate tournament. The
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match
was
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very
exciting and as a strike bowler
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team
, we
really
miss your bowling attack which
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help
us to sheltered our place in final
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match
.
However
, after an enormous effort and all players tackle all
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event
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very
calmly
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helps
us to lift the trophy.

On the
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match
day weather was overcast and it was difficult for players to handle the situation. We had batted
first
and put the score of 180
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but
it was not a
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good
total to handle the opposition
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because
we
are supposed
to miss the tight bowling spell of you.
Lastly
our
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team
had managed to win on last ball victory as they need a two run in one ball and I took the wicket.

As a captain, it was
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very
astonishing movement
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to took
a wicket in last ball and
really
feel
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very
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good
as we were looking to win this tournament in the past two years. I was missing you a lot in the
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match
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because
to win this tournament was our united dream.

Hope to
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see
you on ground
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soon
and take care

Warm wishes,

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Jaiwick
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Soni
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IELTS letter You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • tell him which team won • describe the conditions on the day • say how you felt about the match

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