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You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter • give details of the camera and where you bought it • explain what has happened • say what you want him/her to do about it

You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter • give details of the camera and where you bought it • explain what has happened • say what you want him/her to do about it NBJj

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my concern about a product which I bought from your company last week. I hope that you can help me in this regard. On 27th February, 2021 I purchased a Canon 6d camera from Lulu Connect, Cochin. It cost Rs. 35000/- and I got it for Rs. 32500/- after the reduction. I have paid it through Google pay. I will attach the receipt herewith for your reference. Currently I am in Sydney and unfortunately after reached here only I discovered that the Memory card is missing inside the box. For me the memory card is very essential as I am a wild life photographer and working with a popular magazine As I am not able to come back due to the pandemic situation and replace the item kindly sent the parts to my address, John Nathan, P B Number 225, Opera House Tower, Redfern. Or you can contact me for further references on 1234567890. Kindly do the needful at the earliest. Thanks and regards John Nathan.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my concern about a product which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 last week. I hope that you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me in this regard.

On 27th When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "February 2021".February 2021
February, 2021
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 a Canon 6d camera from Lulu Connect, Cochin. It cost Rs. 35000/- and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 it for Rs. 32500/- after the reduction. I have paid it through Did you mean "Google Pay"?Google Pay
Google pay
. I will attach the receipt herewith for your reference. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Currently,
Currently
 I am in Sydney and unfortunately after reached here This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 I discovered that the Memory card is missing inside the box. For me the memory card is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 essential as I am a wild life photographer and working with a popular magazine

As I am not able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 back due to the pandemic situation and replace the item kindly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 the parts to my address, John Nathan, P B Number 225, Opera This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
House
 Tower, Possible spelling mistake found.Red fern
Redfern
. Or you can contact me for further
 references on 1234567890.

Kindly do the needful at the earliest.

Thanks and regards

John Nathan. 