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A friend is considering buying a house nearby, but you have decided to leave the area due to a rise in crime. Write a letter to your friend advising them not to move into the neighbourhood. In your letter: – Recommend that your friend not go ahead with the purchase – Give the reasons behind your decision to leave – Suggest possible alternative areas that you know

A friend is considering buying a house nearby, but you have decided to leave the area due to a rise in crime. Write a letter to your friend advising them not to move into the neighbourhood. In your letter: – Recommend that your friend not go ahead with the purchase – Give the reasons behind your decision to leave – Suggest possible alternative areas that you know An9L
Dear Hetmyar, After a prolong time period I am happy to heard about you and admit your health is good. As you are looking to purchase a new house nearby my resident but unfortunately, I am supposed to relocate due increasing crime in our area. As from a very long time of era paldi area in Ahmedabad have a very good reputation in a public interest but preceding last two years of time the scenario has been changed. it is my particular belief that don’t go for the transaction of new house in this area. police have lost the control over many prohibited activities which are endangering public so due to that respect various misconduct are increasing day by day. Moreover, Law and order is losing faith of community and criminals having an unrestricted atmosphere to do whatever they want to do. There are many zones which you can put into your list and also have a similar condition to fulfill your rudimentary need. Adjacent area named manekbaug, Jivraj and vasana, you can ponder in your obtaining list. Warm Wishes, Jaiwick soni
Dear
Hetmyar
,

After
a prolong
time period I am happy to heard about you and admit your health is
good
. As you are looking to
purchase
a new
house
nearby my resident
but
unfortunately, I
am supposed
to relocate due increasing crime in our area.

As from a
very
long time of era
paldi
area in Ahmedabad have a
very
good
reputation in a public interest
but
preceding last two years of time the scenario has been
changed
.
it
is my particular belief that don’t go for the transaction of new
house
in this area.

police
have lost the control over
many
prohibited activities which are endangering public
so
due to that respect various misconduct are increasing day by day.
Moreover
, Law and order is losing faith of community and criminals having an unrestricted atmosphere to do whatever they want to do.

There are
many
zones which you can put into your list and
also
have a similar condition to fulfill your rudimentary need. Adjacent area named
manekbaug
,
Jivraj
and
vasana
, you can ponder in your obtaining list.

Warm Wishes,

Jaiwick
soni
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IELTS letter A friend is considering buying a house nearby, but you have decided to leave the area due to a rise in crime. Write a letter to your friend advising them not to move into the neighbourhood. In your letter: – Recommend that your friend not go ahead with the purchase – Give the reasons behind your decision to leave – Suggest possible alternative areas that you know

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  American English
7 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
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