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You are being sent on a one month work assignment in San Francisco, California. You need a place to stay while you are there. Write a letter to the Maury Samson Real Estate Agency. In your letter, • Explain the situation • Describe the kind of accomodation you would like • Provide the dates you will need it

You are being sent on a one month work assignment in San Francisco, California. You need a place to stay while you are there. Write a letter to the Maury Samson Real Estate Agency. In your letter, • Explain the situation • Describe the kind of accomodation you would like • Provide the dates you will need it gm9L
Dear Sir, I Jaiwick soni working in a Hitachi limited would like to inquire about a cost-effective budget apartment on rent for one month of period of time. Please allow me to elaborate. My company Hitachi limited is going to launch uncommon new products so for the skill development program company is spacing a training. As a training head I need to be present there so I need a short-term accommodation with competitive price and rudimentary amenities Due to covid 19 situation company have a very pocket friendly budget and I am only person will stay there so I did not need any overwhelmed amenities in apartment I just required a living room and bedroom with essential furniture to stay over in it. Furthermore, Public transport facilities must be easily accommodating from the staying place. I Intend to stay from 1 may, 2021 for thirty days and I had heard ration of respectable things about Maury Samson Real Estate Agency. I look forward to hearing from you with a prompt and constructive reply. Yours Faithfully, Jaiwick Soni
Dear Sir,

I
Jaiwick
soni
working in a Hitachi limited would like to inquire about a cost-effective budget apartment on rent for one month of period of time.
Please
allow
me to elaborate.

My
company
Hitachi limited is going to launch uncommon new products
so
for the
skill
development program
company
is spacing a training. As a training head I need to be present there
so
I need
a short-term accommodation
with competitive price and rudimentary amenities

Due to
covid 19
situation
company
have a
very
pocket friendly budget and I am
only
person will stay there
so
I did not need any overwhelmed amenities in apartment I
just
required a living room and bedroom with essential furniture to stay over in it.
Furthermore
, Public transport facilities
must
be
easily
accommodating from the staying place.

I Intend to stay from 1
may, 2021
for thirty days and I had heard ration of respectable things about
Maury
Samson Real Estate Agency.

I look forward to hearing from you with a prompt and constructive reply.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Jaiwick
Soni
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IELTS letter You are being sent on a one month work assignment in San Francisco, California. You need a place to stay while you are there. Write a letter to the Maury Samson Real Estate Agency. In your letter, • Explain the situation • Describe the kind of accomodation you would like • Provide the dates you will need it

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