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You ordered a book online for exam preparation. It has been since some time since you ordered it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company about this. Describe your purchase order of the book. Explain the importance of the book. Say what you want the company to do for you.

You ordered a book online for exam preparation. It has been since some time since you ordered it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company about this. Describe your purchase order of the book. Explain the importance of the book. Say what you want the company to do for you. MGpp
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter with regard to inquire/complaint the non-receipt of my purchase order that exceeded the promised delivery period I placed through your website quite a few days ago. To elaborate the same, my purchase order number is ABC1234GJ, Dated 14th June 2020. The order contains an Aptitude test and Logical reasoning book, by renowned author Shakuntala devi, along with a DVD for the visual aided solved problems of mathematics. As I booked it to improve my performance in the upcoming competitive exam two months later and to excel in the areas of real struggle, which will be of a great deal to secure my place on the university campus interview and consequently landing a fine job for my better future prospect. However, I am greatly disappointed with your delivery services as the order is yet to be received, already due from 15 days, and there is no specific reason updated on site as well for this unacceptable delay. As I already mentioned how important for me to receive this book as early as possible, kindly look into the matter with the most critical priority and arrange to send it within 2 days, or full refund, or else I will have to lodge a grievance at the customer care services in strict words which may degrade the value of your business. Awaiting a positive intimation and agile execution from your end. Yours Faithfully, Rinju Chauhan
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter with regard to inquire/complaint the non-receipt of my
purchase
order
that exceeded the promised delivery period I placed through your website quite a few days ago.

To elaborate the same, my
purchase
order
number is ABC1234GJ, Dated 14th June 2020. The
order
contains an Aptitude
test
and Logical reasoning book, by renowned author
Shakuntala
devi
, along with a DVD for the visual aided solved problems of mathematics.

As I booked it to
improve
my performance in the upcoming competitive exam two months later and to excel in the areas of real struggle, which will be of a great deal to secure my place on the university campus interview and
consequently
landing a fine job for my better future prospect.

However
, I am
greatly
disappointed with your delivery services as the
order
is
yet
to
be received
, already due from 15 days, and there is no specific reason updated on site
as well
for this unacceptable delay. As I already mentioned how
important
for me to receive this book as early as possible, kindly look into the matter with the most critical priority and arrange to
send
it within 2 days, or full refund, or else I will
have to
lodge a grievance at the customer care services in strict words which may degrade the value of your business.

Awaiting a
positive
intimation and agile execution from your
end
.

Yours
Faithfully
,
Rinju
Chauhan
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IELTS letter You ordered a book online for exam preparation. It has been since some time since you ordered it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company about this. Describe your purchase order of the book. Explain the importance of the book. Say what you want the company to do for you.

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  American English
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238 words
6.0
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