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You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. say how you felt about the visit refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you

You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. say how you felt about the visit refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you aWxw
Dear Lisa, I hope you are doing well. It's been so long since we last were in touch but I haven't forgotten all the wonderful times we spent together last year. It was one of the best times spent with you. I was so happy to be with you. Even though my stay was just for a few days, me made a lot of beautiful memories that I will always cherish. Remember how we would go on long bicycle rides around the lake and how we used to spend hours chatting while relaxing on the bench near the lake. I miss those days. I'm even able to recall our late night noodles time. It was so fun. And hey, it's my birthday coming up and I wanted to invite you to come and stay over for the celebration as well as we can make more sweet memories. I hope you will be able to plan for the visit. Yours Sincerely, Pooja
Dear Lisa,

I hope you are doing well. It's been
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long since we last were in touch
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I haven't forgotten all the wonderful times we spent together last year. It was one of the best times spent with you. I was
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happy to be with you.
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for a few days, me made
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a lot of
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memories that I will always cherish.

Remember how we would go on long bicycle rides around the lake and how we
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to spend hours chatting while relaxing on the bench near the lake. I miss those days. I'm even able to recall our late night noodles time. It was
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so
fun.

And hey, it's my birthday coming up and I wanted to invite you to
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come
and stay over for the celebration
as well
as we can
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make
more sweet memories. I hope you will be able to plan for the visit.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Pooja

IELTS letter You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. say how you felt about the visit refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you

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