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Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter describe what you like about the library say what you don't like make suggestions for improvements. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses

Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter describe what you like about the library say what you don't like make suggestions for improvements. You do NOT need to write any addresses Bj6j

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to outline an area I feel the Hong Kong Public Library could improve. Please allow me to explain. While perusing titles in the library this past weekend, I could not help but notice the awkward manner in which various sections are organized. For example, all texts in the multimedia lab are classified by author, while the remaining sections of the library are catergorized by title. As you can imagine, this made it exremely difficult for me to track down all the titles I was looking for as I constantly had to shift my thinking from one categorical system to another. I cannot imagine why the resources are organized in this way. I am sure that I would not be the only one who would appreciate your library reorganizing its texts to allow for more standardized browsing by its patrons. Thus, I hope you will consider my suggestion and make the necessary changes. Thanking you in advance, Michael

Dear Sir/Madam,

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improve
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
.

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help
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but
 notice the awkward manner in which various sections are organized
. For example
, all texts in the multimedia lab are classified
 by author, while the remaining sections of the library are Possible spelling mistake found.categorized
catergorized
 by title. As you can imagine, this made it Possible spelling mistake found.extremely
exremely
 difficult for me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
 down all the titles I was looking for as I constantly
 had to shift my thinking from one categorical system to another. I cannot imagine why the resources are organized
 in this way.

I am sure that I would not be the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one who would appreciate your library reorganizing its texts to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 for more standardized browsing by its patrons. Thus
, I hope you will consider my suggestion and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the necessary This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
.

Thanking you in advance,

Michael