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You have recently joined a voluntary organisation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Describe the goals of the organisation Describe your experience as a volunteer Invite your friend to volunteer and tell him/her how this will help him/her. You do not need to write any addresses.

You have recently joined a voluntary organisation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Describe the goals of the organisation Describe your experience as a volunteer Invite your friend to volunteer and tell him/her how this will help him/her. You do not need to write any addresses. GaQB
Dear Susan, I hope you are doing well with your final year of Masters. Sorry, I couldn't get back to you sooner as I was caught up between office and volunteer work. It has been a great experience doing this volunteer activities at my local community. During my whole time there, our main goal was was to educate the community about the need to keep society clean and how one could achieve with just small changes in their lives, along with training younger generation kids the same with some fun-filled activities. I had a really great time participating in two of these volunteer sessions. First of them was leading the team in organizing a day event for training young kids with games and another was to interview around 30 families living in community and take surveys from each member on ways to improve the community cleanliness. Both of these activities helped me in enhancing my organizing skills and interact with my community better. Actually, thinking of it now, why don't you participate alongside me in next month's event as anyway you will be here at that time. This opportunity will definitely give some extra points in your resume once you graduate. Think about it and I am excited to see you in just weeks. Take Care. Love, Amrutha
Dear Susan,

I hope you are doing well with your final year of Masters. Sorry, I couldn't
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get
back to you sooner as I
was caught
up between office and volunteer work.

It has been a great experience doing this volunteer activities at my local
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community
. During my whole time there, our main goal
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was was
to educate the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
community
about the need to
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keep
society clean and how one could achieve with
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just
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small
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changes
in their
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lives
, along with training younger generation kids the same with
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some
fun-filled activities.

I had a
really
great time participating in two of these volunteer sessions.
First
of them was leading the team in organizing a day
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event
for training young kids with games and another was to interview around 30 families living in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
community
and take surveys from each member on ways to
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improve
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
community
cleanliness. Both of these activities
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helped
me in enhancing my organizing
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skills
and interact with my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
community
better.

Actually, thinking of it
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now
, why don't you participate alongside me in
next
month's
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
as anyway you will be here at that time. This opportunity will definitely give
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
extra points in your resume once you graduate.

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Think
about
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it and
I
am excited
to
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see
you in
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just
weeks. Take Care.

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Love
,

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Amrutha
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IELTS letter You have recently joined a voluntary organisation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Describe the goals of the organisation Describe your experience as a volunteer Invite your friend to volunteer and tell him/her how this will help him/her. You do not need to write any addresses.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
217 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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