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Enquiry about memory course

Enquiry about memory course lPK1

Dear Sir or Madam I saw your advertisement on 'memory course' while surfing the internet and I will like to register for the next batch. I am Elizabeth, a sixty-year-old mother of four, and a retired nurse who has worked with major government hospitals in the state's capital. I feel the programme is specially designed for me at such a time when I can barely keep up with facts and figures, and a whole lot of other vital information. My challenge started following the months after my husband's demise and my son was the one who called my attention to it. I had to see a therapist who linked my memory loss to a long period of depression due to the incidence. The course looks good, and I am more excited that it will go on for a period of 10 weeks. However, I will like to find out about the methodology: will it be a general class or a one-on-one with the teachers and therapists? What learning materials and tools will be required? I will also like to have an idea of the course fee to enable me plan my finances towards it. Kindly brief me about the dates as well, I really hope it holds during summer as I dread going out during winters these days. I look forward to your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Toyin

Dear Sir or Madam

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, and I am more excited that it will go on for a period of 10 weeks. However
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 like to have an This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
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 of the course fee to enable me plan my finances towards it. Kindly brief me about the dates as well
, I really
 hope it holds during summer as I dread going out during winters these days.

I look forward to your prompt response.

Yours faithfully
,

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