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You have recently been appreciated by a client. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter Describe the appreciation you have received. Describe the work you have done. Ask him for a raise. You do not need to write any addresses

You have recently been appreciated by a client. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter Describe the appreciation you have received. Describe the work you have done. Ask him for a raise. You do not need to write any addresses PBxK
Dear Mr. Anthony, I am writing this letter to inform you that our product "Task Simply" has been successfully launched at all locations of our client "Synthia". Synthia is hugely impressed by our product usability and also greatly appreciated the entire launch process that was led by me. It has been a productive overall experience for me leading the launch as I got opportunity to organize, plan, design and structure the demo trainings for employees all across their company. Moreover, I took great care to execute all of these tasks within the assigned budget, out of which only 90% was spent. Although, these last 4 weeks has been very stressful, I was able to complete my assigned goal for the year successfully along with improving the client work rate by 15%. Therefore I believe, it would be reasonable for me to ask for justifiable raise for my contributions to the company so far and for more productive work in future. Looking forward for a positive uplifting response from your end. Thanks for putting your confidence on me for this project. Yours sincerely, Andrew
Dear Mr. Anthony,

I am writing this letter to inform you that our product
"
Task
Simply
"
has been
successfully
launched at all locations of our client
"
Synthia
"
.

Synthia
is
hugely
impressed by our product usability and
also
greatly
appreciated the entire launch process that
was led
by me. It has been a productive
overall
experience for me leading the launch as I
got
opportunity to organize, plan, design and structure the demo trainings for employees all across their
company
.
Moreover
, I took great care to execute all of these tasks within the assigned budget, out of which
only
90%
was spent
.

Although, these last 4 weeks has been
very
stressful, I was able to complete my assigned goal for the year
successfully
along with improving the client work rate by 15%.
Therefore
I believe, it would be reasonable for me to
ask for
justifiable raise for my contributions to the
company
so
far and for more productive work
in future
.

Looking forward for a
positive
uplifting response from your
end
. Thanks for putting your confidence on me for this project.

Yours
sincerely
,

Andrew
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IELTS letter You have recently been appreciated by a client. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter Describe the appreciation you have received. Describe the work you have done. Ask him for a raise. You do not need to write any addresses

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6.0
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