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You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.

You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, 2baOX
Dear Sir or Madam, I’m writing this to inquire about the list of expensive purchases shown in my credit card statement for the last month. I did not buy those things. To begin with, I made my last transaction on the 28th of March. In addition to that I see a few other transactions in the statement which I’m totally unaware of. The transactions were made at around the same time at luxury hotels at two different locations. As I cannot be present in two places simultaneously, this is not practically possible. , which is practically impossible. Also, I received neither a message nor an e-mail regarding these purchases made with my card. I suspect that this could be a glitch in the application or an issue with the statement generation for the month. This problem needs immediate resolution. I have been a loyal customer of your bank for long. Although I had faced a similar issue with the services in the past, it got rectified in no time. You may call me directly or assign one of your associates to contact me so that I can provide proof of my bills. Also, I request you to resend the revised statement to avoid further confusion on the bill payment. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Kath
Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing this to inquire about the list of expensive
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchases
shown in my credit card
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
statement
for the last month. I did not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
those things.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, I made my last transaction on the 28th of March.
In addition
to that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
a few other transactions in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
statement
which I’m
totally
unaware of. The transactions
were made
at around the same time at luxury hotels at two
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different
locations. As I cannot be present in two places
simultaneously
, this is not
practically
possible.
Loose punctuation mark.
,
which is
practically
impossible.
Also
, I received neither a message nor an e-mail regarding these
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchases
made with my card. I suspect that this could be a glitch in the application or an issue with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
statement
generation for the month.

This problem needs immediate resolution. I have been a loyal customer of your bank for long. Although I had faced a similar issue with the services in the past, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
rectified in no time. You may call me
directly
or assign one of your associates to contact me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I can provide proof of my bills.
Also
, I request you to resend the revised
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
statement
to avoid
further
confusion on the bill payment.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

Kath

IELTS letter You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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  American English
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218 words
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