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You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.

You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, Wy890
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to show my inconvenience caused by the report generated as credit card invoice which were very expensive and was not purchased by me, Indeed. I am a software engineer whose earnings are pretty much low which is insufficient for my daily needs. Last year, I have offered post-paid money card based on my savings with no interest. However, It was not in use for a long time. Unfortunately, Yesterday, I got a notification from my bank to pay a rupee of twenty five thousands as a bill which exceeds the range of my actual limit. In addition, also advocated us to include the state as well as central level taxes while making payment. Consequently, included additional rate of prime interest. But, I have not bought any good recently. Nevertheless, this issue have to be fixed by bank authorities by enquiring whether my account got hacked by any intruders or is it a software bug which leads to generation of false statements. It would be grateful, If you could resolve this issue by providing accurate slip. Your truthfully, Kat.
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
my inconvenience caused by the report generated as credit card invoice which were
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very
expensive and was not
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purchased
by me,
Indeed
.

I am a software engineer whose earnings are pretty much low which is insufficient for my daily needs. Last year, I have offered post-paid money card based on my savings with no interest.
However
, It was not in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
for a long time. Unfortunately, Yesterday, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
a notification from my bank to pay a rupee of
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
twenty five
thousands as a bill which exceeds the range of my actual limit.
In addition
,
also
advocated us to include the state
as well
as central level taxes while making payment.
Consequently
, included additional rate of prime interest.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, I have not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
recently.
Nevertheless
, this issue
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have to
be
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fixed
by bank authorities by
Possible spelling mistake. 'enquiring' is British English.
enquiring
whether my account
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
hacked by any intruders or is it a software bug which leads to generation of false statements. It would be grateful, If you could resolve this issue by providing accurate slip. Your
truthfully
, Kat.
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IELTS letter You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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  American English
3 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
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