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you have spent a week with a friend on a holiday. when you got home , you realised you had left your wallet there.

you have spent a week with a friend on a holiday. when you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. pR1p2
Dear Paulette, How are you? I hope you are doing good. It is Just been a short time after the holiday spent with you, makes me feel longer. Thank you so much for a memorable holiday. Visiting Florida has always in my bucket list and its scenic beauty has given me fun and happiness. Its was a perfect climate to visit since the weather was not too hot. The beaches, Disneyland, rides and other farm areas were very attractive and joyful. Sorry to inform you that when i was leaving your place accidentally forgot my wallet, there are my credit cards, some money and not only that i have my drivers license in it. It is really hard being without drivers license, facing difficulties in daily activities and commute to office. It would be great help if you can post my wallet to my home address: 14 Robinhood Drive, parlin, NJ-08859. I would transfer you the amount spent on sending the post to you bank account. you can send through USPS or FedEx, these are the two services more frequent in our Neighborhood. I am apologize for troubling you and hope you understand my situation. Take care Keerthi
Dear Paulette, How are you? I hope you are doing
good
. It is
Just
been a short time after the holiday spent with you,
makes
me feel longer. Thank you
so
much for a memorable holiday. Visiting Florida has always in my bucket list and its scenic beauty has
given
me fun and happiness. Its was a perfect climate to visit since the weather was not too hot. The beaches, Disneyland,
rides
and other farm areas were
very
attractive and joyful. Sorry to inform you that when
i
was leaving your place
accidentally
forgot my wallet, there are my credit cards,
some
money and not
only
that
i
have my drivers license in it. It is
really
hard
being without drivers license, facing difficulties in daily activities and commute to office. It would be great
help
if you can post my wallet to my home address: 14
Robinhood
Drive,
parlin
, NJ-08859. I would transfer you the amount spent on sending the post to you bank account.
you
can
send
through USPS or FedEx, these are the two services more frequent in our Neighborhood. I am apologize for troubling you and hope you understand my situation. Take care
Keerthi
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IELTS letter you have spent a week with a friend on a holiday. when you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
197 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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