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You plan to do some traveling in a few months. You would like to visit an old friend who lives in another country. You haven’t spoken to this friend in a few years. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Provide a short update about your life since you saw him/her last - Explain why you will be traveling to his/her city - Say what you would like to do when you visit his/her city

You plan to do some traveling in a few months. You would like to visit an old friend who lives in another country. You haven’t spoken to this friend in a few years. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Provide a short update about your life since you saw him/her last - Explain why you will be traveling to his/her city - Say what you would like to do when you visit his/her city 63b8
I hope everything is good with you. It has been long time since we met. I am writing you this letter today as I am planning to travel Austrailia next month. Let me explain to you in details after finishing bachelor's degree with you I moved to different city to start my professsional life. But I came across an Austrailian University in Melbourne which is providing scholarship for Master's Degree. So I have decided take vacation break from my work and travel. During my stay I want to observe daily lifestyle of people in Melbourne, take tour of University. Apart from this, you can guide me learn more about the city. I hope to see you soon in Melborne. stay safe Your's Faithfully,
I hope everything is
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with you. It has been long time since we met. I am writing you this letter
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today
as I am planning to travel
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Austrailia
next
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me
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explain
to you in
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details
after finishing bachelor's degree with
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you
I
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moved
to
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different
city to
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start
my
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professsional
life.
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But
I came across an
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Austrailian
University in Melbourne which is providing scholarship for Master's Degree.

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So
I have decided take vacation break from my work and travel. During my stay I want to observe daily lifestyle of
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people
in Melbourne, take tour of University. Apart from this, you can guide me learn more about the city.

I hope to
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see
you
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soon
in
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Melborne
.

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stay
safe

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Your's
Faithfully
,

IELTS letter You plan to do some traveling in a few months. You would like to visit an old friend who lives in another country. You haven’t spoken to this friend in a few years. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Provide a short update about your life since you saw him/her last - Explain why you will be traveling to his/her city - Say what you would like to do when you visit his/her city

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  American English
5 paragraphs
123 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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