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You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take 0oNO
Dear Mr. Smith, I am a new tenant in your house no# 143 street 2 with my family. I am newly shifted here from Pakistan. we are 4 family members living in your house. we are facing difficulties in this place regarding old furniture. The furniture in this house is quite old and we cannot accommodate this. the condition of furniture is really bad, there are threads and foam is getting out of the sofas and bad. There are stains on the sofas and they have and smell of cats. A lot of hairs in sofas and they can break any time if a heavy man sits on them. I am a working lady and my old parents cannot service this furniture by themselves. I want to inform you that please change this furniture or at least service this so my old parents would not have any complications regarding this matter. Thank You
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am a new tenant in your
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house
no# 143 street 2 with my family. I am
newly
shifted here from Pakistan.
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we
are 4 family members living in your
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house
.
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we
are facing difficulties in this place regarding
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old
furniture.

The
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furniture
in this
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house
is quite
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old and
we cannot accommodate this.
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the
condition of
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furniture
is
really
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bad
, there are threads and foam is getting out of the sofas and
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bad
. There are stains on the
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sofas and
they have and smell of cats.
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A lot of
hairs in
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sofas and
they can break any time if a heavy
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man
sits on them. I am a working lady and my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
old
parents cannot service this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
furniture
by themselves.

I want to inform you that
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please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
furniture
or at least service this
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so
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
old
parents would not have any complications regarding this matter.

Thank You
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IELTS letter You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
152 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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