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A year ago, you lent your favourite book to a friend who you thought would enjoy it. Unfortunately, your friend has forgotten to return it. The book has sentimental value to you as it had been presented by your grandmother. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: • ask how he or she is doing • remind him / her about the book • explain why you need it back

A year ago, you lent your favourite book to a friend who you thought would enjoy it. Unfortunately, your friend has forgotten to return it. The book has sentimental value to you as it had been presented by your grandmother. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: • ask how he or she is doing • remind him / her about the book • explain why you need it back 63Rx
Dear Raj, Hope you are doing well and I hope you are joyful and healthy. It was fun seeing you last month at Sam's birthday party, It was a blast! But, recently I was told by your cousin that you were sick for a couple of days following that evening, maybe because of the late night flight you took after such a exhausting day. Hope you have recovered to your healthy best and are keeping well now. Please write me back when you are planning to go to Canada. Actually, I wish to remind you about the book, “The Alchemist”, I had given you last year. However, I hope you were able to go through it as I know you would have enjoyed reading it, as I am aware of your liking towards such genre’s. You may have noticed an indicator placed over, on the first page, that brings bringing me to the next part of this letter. This book is really precious to me as my best friend owned it and gave it to me on birthday. If you are still reading it, please send it to me by postal service when you are done. I wish we can meet each other as soon as possible. With lots of love and warm wishes, Sujoy.
Dear Raj,

Hope you are doing well and I hope you are joyful and healthy. It was fun seeing you last month at Sam's birthday party, It was a blast!
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exhausting day. Hope you have recovered to your healthy best and are keeping well
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Please
write me back when you are planning to go to Canada.

Actually, I wish to remind you about the book, “The Alchemist”, I had
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given
you last year.
However
, I hope you were able to go through it as I know you would have enjoyed reading it, as I am aware of your liking towards such genre’s. You may have noticed an indicator placed over, on the
first
page, that brings bringing me to the
next
part of this letter.

This book is
really
precious to me as my best friend
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owned
it and gave it to me on birthday. If you are
still
reading it,
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please
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send
it to me by postal service when you
are done
.

I wish we can
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meet
each other as
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soon
as possible.

With lots of
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love
and warm wishes,

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IELTS letter A year ago, you lent your favourite book to a friend who you thought would enjoy it. Unfortunately, your friend has forgotten to return it. The book has sentimental value to you as it had been presented by your grandmother. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: • ask how he or she is doing • remind him / her about the book • explain why you need it back

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